The combination between sketchy outlines and a painted main figure can turn out pretty cool. However, you could have done more to achieve that in this drawing. You see, the outlines are too sharp in my eyes, and on the gray cloth fluttering behind her, it crashes. At least that's what I think.

If you had defined the lines a bit more, it could have looked quite cool!
On her arm, there is a silvery metal armlet. I take a guess that it's not part of her arm, so the edges of it should be drawn more outside of the arm, to show that it sticks out.

Still, I think this piece has a cool attitude, if I can say that. It has a touch of spontanity to it, which I like. It just lacks a bit in the technical field.

Nice character !

i agree with Jane ..

jane say all, it´s really nice! Great design!

Once again, i appreciate all comments and i really learn from it. ^_^ Thank you!!!

Good work.

^_^ thank you. ^_^